Today’s poem is about an elderly man in some sort of hospice or facility at the edge between reality and dementia and is a very sad poem. It reminded me a little of the movie “The Notebook” when I wrote it. Thanks to the following people on twitter for the 7 random words (in blue) today:

@kyllyan (gossamer), @stnmoon (Forget), @SurfCityJay (bracket), @coyotesqrl (construction), @kikolani (sensitivity), @cheth (spam), @filigreegirl (cameo)

Losing Thought

Thoughts tangled like a gossamer weave
Struggling not to forget her again
Each memory a laboring construction
False memories like email spam
Make the task even harder
Your barely clear thoughts are
Held together by a weakening bracket

Was she your daughter or your wife?
Her sensitivity would indicate the latter
Was this a hello or a goodbye?
Like a star playing a cameo in a movie
She was in your day for a brief moment
And then she was gone

Would you remember her tomorrow?
Would she ever come back?
Did she say she would?
What did she say her name was?
For now you remember though
You remember how much you loved her

-Poem by Dragon Blogger


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Written by dragonblogger (659 Published posts)

I am a dedicated father and husband who works an IT job during the day and has as passion for blogging and poetry. I have been writing poems for more than twenty years and I write at least 1 new poem or haiku per day and publish it on this blog since it started in September 2008.

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