Comments on: Strength of Loss – Random Twitter Poem for May 25th

By: Michelle@lv handbags

Michelle@lv handbags — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 06:15:00 +0000

Thank u for your share.
Life is like a tea table, with bitter cups placed all over it.

By: dragonblogger

dragonblogger — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 15:02:20 +0000

Thanks for your input and feedback on the poem.

By: Jasolin Crusher

Jasolin Crusher — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 05:12:38 +0000

I agree with Zorlone, this is a wonderful poem. While it is very sad, but it does speak volumes and will love and loss. And I think we have all gone through situations where we can relate to this.

By: dragonblogger

dragonblogger — Sun, 27 Sep 2009 20:54:54 +0000

Thank you for reading it and sharing your comment.

By: Shaun@Kitchen Table Furniture

Shaun@Kitchen Table Furniture — Sun, 27 Sep 2009 20:48:40 +0000

Sad poem but very nice.

By: Damien

Damien — Tue, 26 May 2009 03:14:49 +0000

You worked my word "uncharted" in there well. What an uncharted course that would be if I lost my wife. Well done, great poem. Damiens last blog post..Damien Riley on Blog Talk Radio - Simplify Your Life - Creativity and Innovation 5/22/2009

By: matt

matt — Tue, 26 May 2009 02:51:54 +0000

i saw this and totally had to do my own.

it’s called throat bubble

uncharted waters and love for the sea
remembering all the nifty memories of your childhood
like a sunken treasure buried deep within your locker of a head
then your thoughts are drained and the
amount of energy you lose is insurmountable
the last molecule of your breath escapes you
in one miserable surreptitious guffaw
one outwards gasp of aged dust
no need for patience, for you are dead
and there’s nothing left to wait for

By: Zorlone

Zorlone — Tue, 26 May 2009 01:28:40 +0000

This is a good poem about loss and strength after losing the love of his life. Z Zorlones last blog post..The Ice King's Vow